i found in my pursuit of God that He was much more hotly in pursuit of me.

Tuesday, June 20, 2006

bad poetry? oh noetry!

who's for a haiku or two (or forty or so, if the last time we played is any indication)?

you know how they go... three lines, first line five syllables, second line seven, then back to five. here's how syllables work for those of us challenged. the word "how" is one, the word "syllable" is three, the word "supercalifragilisticexpialidocious" is fourteen.

here's what makes it a game, in case you are too lazy to click the above clickie, too senile to remember from the last time, or basically new to my blog; i'll write the first haiku, then someone else comments the next haiku, using my last word as their first word and so on. play as often as you'd like, and have fun!

awesome. let's do it.

janni laine is rad
best sister of ever, ya'll
she's coming home soon!

next haiku starts with the word "soon." ready... steady... GO!



arrivederci, rebecca marie

29 flattering compliments:

Anonymous Anonymous gushed...

Soon I'm gonna have...
a little vacation, sweet! =)
It's been way too long.

6/20/2006 3:06 PM  
Blogger RoniZee gushed...

Long ago was born,
A girl of greatest beauty.
Her name is Roni.

6/20/2006 3:41 PM  
Blogger rebecca marie gushed...

roni zimmerman
wrote the last haiku so good
wrote it good, so hard

6/20/2006 8:32 PM  
Blogger punkindunkin gushed...

hard is the visit
to rebecca marie's site
because it will crash.



(whenever I visit your homepage, and not a specific post, my internet closes on me. It's highly annoying. But I love your site enough to put up with the problem)

6/21/2006 7:23 AM  
Blogger Nicole gushed...

Crash into me, yeah
Love, laughter, happiness, joy
Come find me today

6/21/2006 8:58 AM  
Blogger LoriLoo310 gushed...

Today will be good,
I will go shopping for shoes,
They make my feet sing!

6/21/2006 9:27 AM  
Blogger Sarah gushed...

Sing a song to me
Entertain me, make me laugh
I am super bored.

6/21/2006 10:26 AM  
Blogger rebecca marie gushed...

bored sarah? sorry!
we need to schedule our chats...
i really miss you.

6/21/2006 10:57 AM  
Blogger Jessica gushed...

You, miss Rebecca
have been away from my eyes
way too long, me thinks

6/21/2006 11:23 AM  
Blogger James T Wood gushed...

thinks(ing) to myself
haiku(ing) for all to see
now computer(ing)

6/21/2006 11:37 AM  
Blogger rebecca marie gushed...

computering has
kept me sane in janni laine's
absence, come home soon.

(one more week till we don't have to message each other anymore!!!)

6/21/2006 1:17 PM  
Blogger Paula gushed...

Soon we will be there
We're Portland-bound tomorrow
I miss all my friends

6/21/2006 4:00 PM  
Blogger Nicole gushed...

Friends are fun to have
I only have one bestie
Her name is Annie

6/21/2006 8:50 PM  
Blogger Unknown gushed...

Annie get your gun,
Not so great a picture show,
but not bad either.

either right or left;
It doesn't really matter,
Dexter/Sinister

6/21/2006 10:16 PM  
Blogger JanniLaine gushed...

Sinister is Bend
Hot then cold, snobs in big trucks
Only wealth will do.

6/22/2006 9:09 AM  
Blogger JanniLaine gushed...

Do you know the news?
We are home in seven days!
Becky Boo* YAHOO!

* Only big sister is allowed to ever type that name here :D

6/22/2006 9:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Hill gushed...

Yahoo! is old School
It was the first site I saw
back in '95

6/23/2006 8:46 AM  
Blogger rebecca marie gushed...

95, best year
when i married the mister
on june 25th!

6/23/2006 9:01 AM  
Blogger JanniLaine gushed...

25th was old
Until 35 came 'round
35 years young....

6/23/2006 9:37 AM  
Blogger Sarah gushed...

Young the day is still
If you really miss me so,
pick the phone up now!

Okay just kidding, today isn't a good day for me really, my sis is here, but I miss you tooooooooo!

6/23/2006 11:08 AM  
Blogger Jason Hill gushed...

Now is over now
or is it just beginning?
Did it ever start?

6/23/2006 12:51 PM  
Blogger tabitha jane gushed...

start your life today
the future is all you have
don't live with regret

6/23/2006 1:03 PM  
Blogger bscarter gushed...

Regret? Not so much.
Boomer Sooner, dudes
We going to Oregon

6/23/2006 10:48 PM  
Blogger Jess gushed...

Oregon, oregon, zoo
Your animals all go poo
yes, I ryhmed, cool.

6/23/2006 11:40 PM  
Blogger JanniLaine gushed...

Cool 80's rap was.
De La Soul is from the soul
Me, myself and I

6/24/2006 12:46 PM  
Blogger Kaisa gushed...

I like coloring
Contests enable people
Try some new color

6/28/2006 6:07 PM  
Blogger Kaisa gushed...

Color graffiti
on the Berlin Wall. It fell
with communism.

6/28/2006 6:09 PM  
Blogger Norman gushed...

Communism sucks,
Just like my ingrown toenail
Ow Ow Ow Ow Ow

7/03/2006 8:36 PM  
Blogger tabitha jane gushed...

ow my stomach hurts
reading 90's magazines
in a moving car

7/06/2006 4:18 PM  

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